Can one make a case for the importance of the "great tradition" of verse that
dominated poetry until the Baby Boomer generation? That cut-off point is
commonly chosen because the five-volume poem, Paterson, by
William Carlos Williams, was published in 1946 and is seen not as the
first free verse but as the beginning of the dominance of the free-verse
school. Paterson, unsurprisingly, was written partly as
Williams's response to Ulysses by James Joyce. Commentators see
him, also, as imitating "The Wasteland" by T.S. Eliot.
So, what is the "importance" of
traditional verse? That readers for centuries have delighted in
such poetry, viewed it as incomparably enhancing the experience of life,
and expressing things from the soul otherwise ineffable might be an
argument. That the literary geniuses in each age have dedicated their
lives to poetry, even if like William Shakespeare and Thomas Hardy they
were literary giants in other fields might be an argument. That great
educators at top schools and colleges long viewed poetry as a bedrock of
liberal education and mastery of the English language might be an
argument.
Proponents of free verse, of
course, argue that those roles of poetry continue today, at first
enriched—now dominated—by free verse. But there is a fundamental problem
with that response.
The problem is that free verse is not poetry!
What Is Poetry? This is the first stanza of
Shakespeare's famous 73 sonnet. The first three lines set the meter
(perfect iambic pentameter—alternation of unstressed and stressed
syllables); then, the poet claims his payoff with a fourth line that
piles up stressed syllables (no fewer than seven out of ten) to achieve
incomparable emphasis. - /
- / -
/ - /
- / That time of year though mayst
in me behold When yellow leaves, or none, or
few, do hang Upon those boughs that shake
against the cold, /
/ /
- / -
/ /
/ Bare ruin'd choirs where late
the sweet birds sang. Why are metrical effects the
only definitively poetic effects? Because prose shares all other
effects achievable by poetry such as denotation and connotation,
metaphor, rhythm, assonance and consonance, imagery, sentence structure,
and tone. William Faulkner and Thomas Wolfe are modern novelists said to
write "poetic prose," which means prose notable for the effects listed
above. Another widely heralded example is Vladimir Nabokov, who was
primarily a novelist but also a notable poet and translator of poetry. We have no problem recognizing
these "poetic" novelists without fear of confusing their prose with
poetry in the great tradition. But that is decidedly not the case with
free verse. I offer this challenge to free verse writers: If you did not
use line breaks, would we know that this was a poem and not a
beautifully written prose sketch or a paragraph from a novel? There is no effective answer to
this challenge except to point to other devices introduced into
free verse to signal that it is not prose. Many writers of free verse,
for example, use little or no punctuation. Many eliminate connecting
words such as propositions and articles. Most resort to obscure
references and oblique descriptions so the reader's first reaction on
finishing the poem typically is "This is beautiful, but I don't really
understand what it means." Well, then! It must be poetry,
right? Because the first quality sought in all other writing is
intelligibility. In "real" poetry, line lengths
are defined by the number of poetic feet in the verse form the poet
chooses. The most common poetic foot by far in English poetry is the
iamb (an unstressed syllable, then a stressed one). The poet selects a
three-foot line (trimeter), four-foot line (tetrameter), five-foot line
(pentameter), or six-foot line (hexameter). For each, there are many
thousands of famous models from centuries of English prosody. Each line
length has well-known potential and characteristics. In free verse, line length and
line breaks are arbitrary or, to be more charitable, chosen by each poet
for each line of each poem according to "feel"—and justified, when
required, by reference to a one-off argument. The destination of this
logic long ago became clear but now is more widespread: "paragraph
poetry," which dispenses with the line-break charade. It is important to mention
rhyme. Use of rhyme is limited to poetry (there is no systematic rhyming
in prose), but poetry is not limited to rhyme. Shakespeare's plays are
written in blank verse (unrhymed iambic pentameter) and there is a long
tradition of such verse, including Robert Frost's longer poems such as
"The Hired Man" and "The Witch of Coos." Thus, while rhyme is perhaps
the most striking and beloved aspect of poetry, meter is its defining
and indispensable characteristic.
Where Have They Gone with
Poetry? So, too, have readers. Today,
many people write free verse, often sitting down for an hour or less to
produce a poem for a workshop, but far fewer people read poetry
or listen to it. Poets, groups of poets, bookstores, and bars hold
poetry readings, but they are attended mostly by other poets. The
standard ploy is the "open mic," where poets sign up to read one or two
poems. To get to read, they must listen to the other poets. Not
infrequently, the total attendance at a reading can be ascertained by
counting how many people have signed up to read. Very few names
of free verse writers, today, even those on the scene for decades, are
as widely known to the reading public as are the last poets in the great
tradition (all now deceased): William Butler Yeats, T.S. Eliot, Ezra
Pound, Robert Frost, and Dylan Thomas. Poetry today has given up its
audience because it has given up poetry. Although it requires an article
of its own, a question bound to arise is "Where have poets inspired by
the genuine poetic impulse gone, and what have they done with poetry?"
Two evident possibilities are that the poets attend "Poetry Slams" or
write, and listen, to "Rap" presentations (now part of "Hip-Hop").
Slam It, Rap It, Hip It, Hop
It The Slam emphasizes personality
and performance; Slam poetry is performed poetry. There is
nothing new or dubious about that, of course. Slams have injected the
human voice back into poetry and voice, gesture, and drama can
compensate for many shortcomings in the work itself. Nevertheless, the
Slam is a limited window on the world. It began as political protest and
remains just that, now heavily focused on Identity Politics. Audiences
view Slams as political protest events. Susan B.A. Somers-Willett in
The Cultural Politics of Slam Poetry (University of Michigan Press,
2009) writes that "poems that make an empowered declaration of
marginalized identity and individuality are a staple of one's slam
repertoire." Here is a stanza from a poem by Tyehimba Jess: "when
your man comes home from prison, when he comes back like the wound and
you are the stitch, when he comes back with pennies in his pocket and
prayer fresh on his lips, you got to wash him down first." One Slam poet and critic,
Cristin O'Keefe Aptowicz, offers a partial
rundown of Poetry Slam styles as "…ranting hipsters, freestyle rappers,
bohemian drifters, proto-comedians, mystical shamans and gothy punks…"
Among those "styles" emphatically is not poetry if poetry is
defined by the great tradition of prosody evolved over seven or more
centuries by poets writing in English. Well then, has the poetic
impulse escaped free verse and found refuge in Rap music? Something
has found refuge there! Forbes reports that Rap is now a $10
billion a year industry, and "its customer base is the 45 million hiphop
consumers between the ages of 13 and 34, 80% of whom are white." Rap, unlike Slamming, is not
even putatively in the tradition of English poetry. It is semi-song
(particularly chanting) accompanied by background music; Rap traces its
origins, as do the blues and spirituals, to African roots, specifically
the West African tradition of oral historians or "praisesingers." Rap
undoubtedly is rhythmic and does employ rhyme—in fact, obsessively so as
in the psychotic thought disorder called "clanging" in which the patient
connects thoughts chiefly by rhymes and puns. Like Rap, but more so, its
window on the world is narrow: sex, domestic violence, racism, and a
disturbingly repetitious focus on killing police officers. Here's a
famous line from rapper 4hunnidGs: "Scared to death, scared to look, they
shook Are those individuals longing to
experience poetry in the great tradition going to gravitate to Rap?
Or is Rap even remotely portending a return of poetry's popular appeal.
It does have popular appeal, but the appeal is not poetry.
The Animus Against Poetry An analogy with the visual arts
has been drawn. What we call modern, or "abstract," or "non-objective"
art specifically rejects what had been viewed as the defining
characteristic of art: representation. In other words, a drawing,
a painting, is of something. All other aspects of such art—shape,
color, pattern, movement, texture— remain. Obviously, the thesis is a broad
one, but it can be indicated in concert music, too. What is sometimes
called "modern" music, to which audiences are treated because government
and corporate funders of the arts insist on "recognizing it," lacks
melody, harmony, and tonality. At one time, and demonstrably still, for
most concert goers those were the very definition of "classical music."
Tracing how "modern" music emerged can illuminate poetry, too, for in
music there is an explicit assertion that music has no timeless truths
and no classical principles. So, stop criticizing! Once upon a time, painting
pictures of "something" and approaching poetry writing in the context of
metrical structure were to recognize the nature of an art form. In "Nineteen Hundred and
Nineteen," William Butler Yeats, the last of the great Romantic poets
and the foremost [traditional] poet of the Twentieth Century,
looked back on World War I and wrote lines that
apply to many things we have let slip away by today: "Many ingenious lovely things
are gone
Robert Frost said so and T.S.
Eliot said so; but logic, including the nature of definition, also
says so. The essential—that is, defining—characteristic of poetry as an
art form is meter. A poet establishes an underlying pattern of
stressed and unstressed syllables, then varies it to achieve poetic
effects such as enhanced emphasis or lighter movement. The meter and
specifically the variations are directions for the speaking
voice. And the only definitively poetic effects are achieved this
way.
And so, today, poetry's
well-established precincts (school and college literature and creative
writing classes, magazines that publish poems, and poetry journals)
increasingly are inhabited by free verse. In literature classes, at
least for now, poetry's great tradition gets some coverage but, at all
ages and in all contexts, the writing of poetry overwhelmingly means
free verse. That means, in the context of my thesis here, that the
poetry establishment has given up on poetry.
The 2014 National Poetry Slam
featured 72 certified teams, culminating in five days of competition.
There are permanent venues for Slams in many cities. Since the movement
began in the mid-1980s, the Slam has absorbed new poets and become
increasingly "mainstream." In 2017, Tyehimba Jess, a poet who competed
at the National Poetry Slam, won the Pulitzer Prize for Poetry. Several
slammers have won National Endowment of the Arts Fellowships for
Literature; a few teach now teach on college faculties.
Cause ain't no such things as halfway
crooks..."
It is possible to put what has
happened to poetry in a wider context to reveal the philosophical
"motives," or underlying ideology, of the free- verse movement. The key
to argument is that free verse specifically rejects the essential
characteristic of poetry. Vers libre—free verse--is "poetry"
without meter. No other elements of poetry are rejected, but the element
that is rejected defines poetry. This has the earmarks of
a philosophical agenda.
That seemed sheer miracle to the multitude..."
From Ayn Rand's Road to Romanticism by Walter Donway. Amazon Books: New York City, 2022.
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